北京朝阳区高三一模英语试卷写作解析

第一节（15 分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国同学Jim 写一封电子邮件，告知周末你不能参加他的生日聚会，希望他谅解。邮件的内容包括：

1. 表达歉意；

2. 说明理由；

3. 告知已准备了生日礼物。

注意： 1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Best wishes,

Li Hua

第二节（20 分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你在寒假期间参加“丝绸之路文化行”敦煌站的活动过程，并以“Silk Road Travel”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。

注意：1. 词数不少于60；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：莫高窟 the Mogao Caves

Silk Road Travel

  This winter vacation I went to Dunhuang to explore the Silk Road with my classmates.

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第一节（15分）

Dear Jim,

I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go to your birthday party this Saturday.

My uncle will come to Beijing from America on Saturday afternoon. My parents want me to go to the airport with them to pick him up. So it’s a pity that I can’t have fun with you then.

I wish you have a happy birthday and hope everything will go well. By the way, I have bought the latest CD of Jay Chou for you as a birthday present and I will give it to you on Monday.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

第二节（20分）

Silk Road Travel

   This winter vacation I went to Dunhuang to explore the Silk Road with my classmates.

   As soon as we got off the train, we were all excited and attracted by the historical touch. The next day, we visited the Mogao Caves. Impressed by the splendid construction, we took many photos. A narrator introduced the wall painting to us. With curiosity, we listened attentively, asking questions and taking notes. The camel ride on the third day was surely the most exciting part of our tour. Looking far into the desert, I pictured how ancient Chinese travelled along the Silk Road. How time flew. Soon it was the last day of our tour. At the train station, we took a photo holding a banner with “Culture Tour along the Silk Road” on it.

  The trip ended but my interest keeps growing and I’m longing to see more interesting sites along the Silk Road.