北京东城区高三一模英语试卷写作解析

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）第一节（15 分）

美国友好校学生来你校参加为期一周的艺术交流活动，你负责接待并致辞。发言内容包括：

1.表示欢迎；

2.简要介绍学校的某艺术社团的基本情况（例如：合唱团、戏剧社、舞蹈队、书画社等）；

3.表示美好祝愿。

注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear friends,                                                                 

(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内）

第二节（20 分）

假如你是红星中学高三1班的李华。请按以下四幅图的顺序，给你校“英语园地”投稿，介绍上学期你们班参加学校组织的“2015，中国”的主题板报的比赛过程。

注意： 1.词数不少于60；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。3.提示词：阅兵式military parade

Last term, our school held a blackboard newspapercontest on“Unforgettable 2015 in China”.

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35 分）

第一节：应用文写作（15 分）考核题材为欢迎致辞。

难度较大，容易出现赘述或表达不得当等现象。重要要点如下：

1. 欢迎：Welcome to our one-week Art Festival!

2. 简要介绍学校某艺术团的基本情况，既可以选择写列举中的也可以写列举之

外的。但不能把列举项逐一翻译。

3. 表达美好祝愿：We hope you canenjoy … / Best wishes and have fun!

One Possible Version:

Dear friends,

Welcome to our one week Art Festival!

Our school offers a wide variety of artprograms. The drama club is among the best. It has been giving niceperformances nationwide. And you will get a chance to watch their shows. Ofcourse, we are looking forward to appreciating your wonderful performance aswell!

We hope you can enjoy the Art Festivalas much as we do. Best wishes and have fun!

第二节：情景写作（20 分）

学校活动类话题，参加学校组织的“2015，中国”的主题板报比赛活动。难度适中，场景涵盖班会、讨论、分工合作及颁奖四大写作高频场景。写作要点有：

1. at the class meeting, our teachertold us about …, the blackboard newspaper contest

2. class discussion, lots of ideaspopped into our minds, military parade,Winter Olympic

3. got down to work, wrote the events,decorated it with beautiful drawings

4. won the first prize, be proud of ourteamwork

One Possible Version:

Last term, our school held a blackboard newspaper contest on“Unforgettable2015 in China”.

At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the activity,saying that the year, 2015 was really a memorable year. In the afternoon, theideas of the military parade and the Winter Olympic Games came to usimmediately. When the designing work was done, we set about working on theblackboard. We took on different tasks. Besides writing down the main events ofthe year neatly on the blackboard, we also decorated it with beautifuldrawings. Thanks to our hard work, our design finally won the first prize. Wewere not only proud of our teamwork but also deeply impressed by the greatachievements of our country.